FIrst of all, your title was very catchy! Makes the readers want to read!

I liked every single stanza! I always pick out my favorite but I liked them all! I enjoy how you write, although this was a very sad write :(...I understand crying and the feeling of "I wish these tears would stop" Hope everything is ok with you and this poem isnt true! Nice write!

Nicely done. I liked the rhyme and flow in this poem. Good work on it.

Wow, I like the every bit of detail you added into this poem. Describing everything to a tee. Well done, that really made it easy to see a clear picture. I also liked the ending, it fit so well.

Great descriptions and expressions. They were nicely put together, and the flow was right there. The ending put it all together, Great Job.

There wasn't any guilt in the poem. There was fear at the last stanza because, if I did tell anyone, I would get the same replies as I did, which is all getting mad at me because I am what I am, and I would get the same response from my family and friends. There is fear to tell people what Religion I am. And in that poem, I shared my feelings of what it first was when I was changing my Religion, but really I didn't change my Religion just because of that. To you he might be there, but to me, he is just a figment of our imagination.

A truly wonderful job, it is so great and so meaningful. you are truly a great poet, I wish I could lwrite like you.
a very strong poem

Nice poem... Well spoken. Very strong.
And I'm sorry, but I'm not sure what else to say.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

And thank you for the kind comment.. It meant a lot.. I'm going to go reread my poem (I Am) and try to read it as you did. ^.^

That is awsome
-kristyn

What an amazing poem. I love the begining. I thought the imagery was really great, I got a vivid image of what you had wrote, It kept my attention and the flow was amazing. Great Job.

Brilliant, truly magnificent. I loved this poem very much! I love the imagery and emotion built into this poem. You put a lot of yourself in this poem and I admire that.

You opened the door for others to see what lies inside and you did a wonderful job! This poem really astonished me. You are a great writer! I love it!!

My favorite stanza was:

"On the table before her,
Sits a broken, tattered book,
Inside is her story,
If anyone dared look."

It sends the message that the book has remain unread by any eyes but her own (which I presume is you). It shows that you're alone. And that you feel no one cares enough to get to know the real you. Like they won't take the time to hear you out. I like the book metaphor. I assume it's a metaphor, but even if it's not, the idea is still great.

I also liked how you ended the poem with:

"Before you can close misery's door."

Good job! I can't stress how amazing this poem was. Keep up the amazing work!! 5/5!

~BJ~