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by xLongxXxLostx Jun 21, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / other
To corrupt your heart with darkness Set upon the world a plague Tell them of your troubles a defined state of vagueKeep your emotions at bay Clense your thoughts in tears Let it all escape; Your pain throughout the yearsSet in your own isolation Let nightmares take you home Forever a solitary life Wherever you may roamTears falling freely Raining from crimson eyes Lonely is your heart That forever criesSadness in sorrowed minds A face broken in relfection Torment your heart and soul With haunting imperfectionEnter the minds of us demented Understand the wicked's dreams Maybe youre the one to help And hear their silent screamsHeal the injured life Pick up their broken pieces Console the depraved spirit When the heartbeat ceases(This random-ness is what happens when I have a little less than 18 hours of sleep in over a week... but, tell me what you think still...)
by Sarah Ann
"Tell the of your troubles" ^I think there was a typo there, other than that, keep up your fantastic work! This poem was excellent, very emotional and heartfelt. It was complete in everyway. Thank you for your comment on my poem! Take care xxx