Amazing poem i lvoe it. it has alot of emotion put in it. its deep and sad but i like it. i can relate to it. u have talent so keep on writing i will keep reading ur poems.. great job
take care
luve angie

I love your poem. It is so cute but just make sure you get rid of those errors. =] Beautifully written and I could say much more but i'd probably bore you so 5/5 =]
Much Love,
Rayne xx