Tomorrow's Another Day

by Wings Of Flames   Jun 21, 2006


The sky fell into darkness,
As the rain came pounding down,
The bath filling with blood,
As I began to drown,

A car crashed through the night,
Into depths of a tree,
Leaves scattered everywhere,
So they could rescue me,

Mother pulled the plug for me,
So I could have her bed,
Dying for my stupidity,
Just so I could rest my head,

Father looks down with disgust,
Pure hate in his eyes,
I stabbed my brother through the heart,
For he murdered with despise,

I fought each battle to no end,
Until there was no more,
I trembled with what I had done,
Father on the floor,

I stood above my creation,
Then pondered if I should stay,
But I remember those noble words,
Tomorrow's another day.

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  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Thanks for entering my competition i said i would comment on the poem everyone entered so here is. . . results will be posted soon
    i loved how you used the title right at the end, made for a very effective ending and a lighter happier end the the darkness of the rest of the poem, good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Interesting. i would say more but i'm sooo rushed. love ya. suz

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Another good piece by you i see. i liked the way it was written and the flow, and obviously its a well thought poem, with depth, intelligence and creativity.

    Brad

    P.S. now you might think i just say the same thing about your work everytime but if i do its because that is how i genuinely feel about your piece

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