Another good piece by you i see. i liked the way it was written and the flow, and obviously its a well thought poem, with depth, intelligence and creativity.

Brad

P.S. now you might think i just say the same thing about your work everytime but if i do its because that is how i genuinely feel about your piece

Interesting. i would say more but i'm sooo rushed. love ya. suz

Thanks for entering my competition i said i would comment on the poem everyone entered so here is. . . results will be posted soon
i loved how you used the title right at the end, made for a very effective ending and a lighter happier end the the darkness of the rest of the poem, good job