Like A Man So Mean

by End Of Eternity   Jun 21, 2006


As i lay my fist on wall
my knees gets so weak
crashes down on floor
i barely could speak

light turns to darkness
voices captures my mind
every inch of body aches
just when i look behind

everytime that we make a fight
i feel my end coming so close
somehow it happens everyday
these fights have become a daily dose

sometimes i just wonder
if we all go through same?
if we are born to be blamed?
will these things ever change?

i guess, i make no sense
life is just meant to be so green
on the other side of the fence
and so i keep breathing like a man so mean

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nitin
    This poem is so sad. Excellent job with your writing.

    light turns to darkness
    voices captures my mind
    every inch of body aches
    just when i look behind

    Very captivating.
    Excellent job!
    Take Care
    Love your friend Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    This poem is so well written. Love is one of the most painful yet wonderful things we ever experience. You capture it so well. Wonderful writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "life is just meant to be so green
    on the other side of the fence"

    I used to hate people saying the grass is always greener on the other side. But i guess sometimes they have a point.
    I'm slowly but surely getting through all your poems in no particular order =)
    Another great one over here!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    It's easy to see the pain flow through this poem. it's raw with emotion and every line is very powerful.

    hope you are doing ok.

    peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow, gr8 again. i like the emotions that seemed to be in this one. it was really good. 5/5

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