Well life is hell if it's lived in such a way . i wish ppl who r leading such a life will get to see some light that dark clouds prevented from seeing it.

Love,
Wishy

Hey darl this was p0werful and deep. wel written xx

Wow this is really great
you know I really missed your poems..to death actually!
I love every stanza here..I guess it makes sense..at least for me...
Wish You Good Luck
NemO x0x

Sometimes i just wonder
if we all go through same?
if we are born to be blamed?
will these things ever change?

i really like this verse, its so true, we were born to be blamed i like that the best xox sam

5/5

Oh dear... that was fabulous. very well written. 5/5

luv

This is a very practical poem you wrote here. The ones who experience it knows what you are talking about and it makes all the sense to them. Excellent poem one again. I can actually feel the pain you're writing about. I guess everyone does go through the same thing.

Best Wishes
Michelle

So much pain... hmm.. i have no other words...
keep writing.. that is all i can say....

love,
ipsita

That was so touching and sad! Actually, you described the way you felt in such a way readers could feel it too. Your poem was awesome. Keep writing, we all loved it!
Best wishes.
xx

((TILLmyLASTtearFALLS))

Wow, gr8 again. i like the emotions that seemed to be in this one. it was really good. 5/5

It's easy to see the pain flow through this poem. it's raw with emotion and every line is very powerful.

hope you are doing ok.

peace
shobhana

"life is just meant to be so green
on the other side of the fence"

I used to hate people saying the grass is always greener on the other side. But i guess sometimes they have a point.
I'm slowly but surely getting through all your poems in no particular order =)
Another great one over here!
5/5
*Gem*

This poem is so well written. Love is one of the most painful yet wonderful things we ever experience. You capture it so well. Wonderful writing.

Nitin
This poem is so sad. Excellent job with your writing.

light turns to darkness
voices captures my mind
every inch of body aches
just when i look behind

Very captivating.
Excellent job!
Take Care
Love your friend Cindy