Stuck living the same day.

by AllCutUp   Jun 21, 2006


As time slips by
Her life fades
Its seems to be
In a reoccurring daze

She wakes up late
Rushes to get ready
She arrives at school
And wishes it was over already

Her classes drag on
She doesnt understand anything
She used to be top
In everything.

Her standards have slipped
The pressures too much
Her lifes incomplete
And staying in the same place as if it were stuck.

She sees the boy
That broke her heart
Smiling at new girls
She doesnt feel so smart.

She gets home
Time flys by
Her homework is plying up
She just wants to die.

At 12am
She crawls into bed
But she cant sleep
Theres too many thoughts in her head.

What is there to wake up for?
Why should i care?
She takes the knife
And trys to end the nightmare.

So she cuts herself
Until she drifts off to sleep
To wake up in the morning
She struggles to her feet

She starts the day
Her bus arrives
She swears she will
Find a reason to stay alive.

But she must hurry
For soon she will lose hope
Too much pressure
Shes going to choke.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    I like this one a lot.. It flows really well and i like the rhythm to it.. I think it's great though.. I can relate a lot to it.. Sounds like every day for me...Good poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by rochelle

    This poem is really written well...
    i can relate alot its pretty much excatly how i feel...i really liked it
    keep up the good work
    take care
    much love rochelle...x

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Amazing poem. it has good flow.. word choice.. and rhythm.. its amazing. i love it.. i can really relate.. thats how i feel.. alot of other ppl feel the same way. its sad how that is.. wel ur very talented adn this is a great poem.. i love it.. great job.
    take care
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammib

    Pressure is a reality of life, this poem really does describe how alot of people feel. Pressure. Pain. Never seeing a way out. Nicely written. Just a suggestion... dont use the word And to much. It throws the flow off a little. But really awesome write!!

    Godbless
    Sammib