by Jessica Jun 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
I look down at the ground |
by Megann Lee
Awh ,this is really sweet . Iloved the last stanza the most. It was beautiful. Great Write Jessy. |
by holly
Thanks for entering my competition i said i would comment on the poem everyone entered so here is. . . |
by ♥kazza♥
This had great depth and emotion in it... really great... it had flow and was easy to read... |
by lexie
Amazing!it flowed very well and was gorgeous.it was more of a joy than anything to read:D |
A really nice poem! And it reminded me of a day i cannot forget...=). So thanks and keep writing! It was very beautiful! |