Very nice poem Jessy =P ..It's so..lovey. Lol. You worded this beautifuly, Just like all your poems. And they make me smile =D Tehe. Awesome job! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

It was very well written, i really liked it! great job babes... 5/5

The formation was great, the words were beautiful so descriptive and emotional very touching x

A really nice poem! And it reminded me of a day i cannot forget...=). So thanks and keep writing! It was very beautiful!
xx

...TILLmyLASTtearFALLS...

Amazing!it flowed very well and was gorgeous.it was more of a joy than anything to read:D
--lexie

This had great depth and emotion in it... really great... it had flow and was easy to read...

Kazza

Thanks for entering my competition i said i would comment on the poem everyone entered so here is. . .

i love how you told a story with the poem, effective use of repetition and mostly the flow was good, there were on or tow points where it was a little off but all in all a very enjoyable poem to read

Awh ,this is really sweet . Iloved the last stanza the most. It was beautiful. Great Write Jessy.