Blue (A Nonet)

by Sean Allen   Jun 21, 2006


As deep as the ocean's vibrant hue
and as cold as the sea is too;
crisp as an autumn morning,
like how your eyes shine true.
Color my heart with
downcast feelings
when I'm not
with you:
blue.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    OMG! I love your writings...I don't know what exactly I love about them. I guess I like how they get straight to the point. love it hope to see more very soon!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    That was vey sweet, once again, excellent!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sophi[e]

    Good presentation.
    I like the way you reveal the meaning of the poem right at the end. It is closed off very effectively and is overall a well written piece.
    Sophie x

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Interesting poem, nice way to write a nonet.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. how do you write such excellent poetry? you truly are an amazing writer.. maybe i will try writing one of these.. :P although, it looks really hard! great job! 5/5

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