by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS Jun 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Since the day of her birth |
by Katie
That was soo sad, you expressed it beautifully and i really enjoyed reading it, keep it up and never stop writing, it's one of your natural gifts |
Not doing any favour by commenting so no need to return... |
That was an awesome poem. Thank you for commenting on my friends poem. 5/5 for you |
by Jessica
Awwww.. that is soo sadd.. the emotion was clear and the descriptions were good.. the flow worked as well.. nice job! 5/5 |