Awwww.. that is soo sadd.. the emotion was clear and the descriptions were good.. the flow worked as well.. nice job! 5/5

That was an awesome poem. Thank you for commenting on my friends poem. 5/5 for you

Not doing any favour by commenting so no need to return...
well, i really liked what u wrote here & spl the way u started it.....there was no rhyme to the poem but when something is coming right from heart...i dont think any rhyme or reason is needed, u know what...u sitting in some part of the world & i in some other...still i could feel within the words u hv written and thats what for me is an art...great work indeed

all the best and take care
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That was soo sad, you expressed it beautifully and i really enjoyed reading it, keep it up and never stop writing, it's one of your natural gifts