Inside of Me (an old poem of mine)

by Raychil   Jun 21, 2006


In*I found this the other day in a notebook of some of my old poems...I just felt like submitting it..

As I sit here in this place
My thoughts fill me with disgrace
As the memories flood my mind
There's no safety I can find

Forgiveness seems impossible
The tears are almost unstoppable
So much fear and hurt inside
My emotions going on quite a ride

I wipe the tears from my eyes
So no one sees what my smile hides
I lock up my thoughts and walk out the door
It's just time to pretend again, nothing more..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Todd

    Rachel...its amazing how much we are the same...i lylas hun... all this that we are going through will work out...

  • 18 years ago

    by dyingbrokenangel

    Really good poem.. your a great poet.. i like the way u have written it xox

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Amazign poem.. its really good. it has good flow word choice and rhythm. its amazing. i lveo it. i like readin ur poems. they r all really good. keep it up.. great job
    take care
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ

    Good poem..i really like it...

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Loved the rhyme in the poem-helped the flow 5/5

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