Crime That Should Not Be Committed

Wonderful poem and the topic you chose was perfectly well described. I know how difficult it may be to write about this, but it will be worthwhile if it helps to any reader who goes through the same. You really gave us some food for thought, keep writing!
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...TILLmyLASTtearFALLS...

Wow i can relate to this. i'm bulimic and anorexic.. have been for about 3 weeks. i was a couple years ago then stopped but now i've started again. it is hard to end it. but if your going through this good luck with stopping its hard. awesome poem 5/5

Wow....amazing poem-really sad and full of emotion. You expressed them well. I also liked the repetition in it. It really made a point. Great job! 5/5

Very good poem! I really like to title. The rythem was very good. I also thought it was going to rhyme at first, but the poem turned out great anyway. I hope everything goes well for your friend, she is very lucky to have you. 5/5

I liked this poem alot. I went through a stage where I was making myself throw up, not because I thought I was fat though, I was cutting and I had to stop, and I got so stressed out and had to find another why to let everything out? If that makes sense.

Anywho, Your friend is very lucky to have you. And, I hope all goes well for her. Very good poem, Jessy. You did a great job! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.