I thought the repitition of the first stanza at the end was pretty effective in bringing the poem full circle. There was a sort of fledgling rhythm throughout the poem, but I wouldn't say there was much of a strong one that permeated throughout... I'm not sure if you'd want to invest the time to reconstruct your poem to make one, but c'est la vie. Good poem, bulimia is a terrible and destructive thing.

Pretty good poem. I actually expected it to rhyme from the first verse, but even still, it was a great poem. I really don't understand how people can do that to themselves. It's horrible and it's disgusting. Awesome poem of awareness.

Well, i know how you feel in this one too...You can tell you really care about whoever this person may be..You expressed your words beautifully..

Very expressive and well writen poem well done

I liked this poem alot. I went through a stage where I was making myself throw up, not because I thought I was fat though, I was cutting and I had to stop, and I got so stressed out and had to find another why to let everything out? If that makes sense.

Anywho, Your friend is very lucky to have you. And, I hope all goes well for her. Very good poem, Jessy. You did a great job! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Very good poem! I really like to title. The rythem was very good. I also thought it was going to rhyme at first, but the poem turned out great anyway. I hope everything goes well for your friend, she is very lucky to have you. 5/5

Wow....amazing poem-really sad and full of emotion. You expressed them well. I also liked the repetition in it. It really made a point. Great job! 5/5

Wow i can relate to this. i'm bulimic and anorexic.. have been for about 3 weeks. i was a couple years ago then stopped but now i've started again. it is hard to end it. but if your going through this good luck with stopping its hard. awesome poem 5/5

Wonderful poem and the topic you chose was perfectly well described. I know how difficult it may be to write about this, but it will be worthwhile if it helps to any reader who goes through the same. You really gave us some food for thought, keep writing!
xx

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