Very good poem, I loved it, 5/5 keep up the good work!

Omgg that was soo very touching..If this is true, i'm really happy you felt that way..it's a great feeling to have! you did a wonderful job your rhymes flowed perfectlly!! 5/5

I love ur poem. it had a veri strong meaning to it keep it up. ull get far.

Oh my lord, Darien, this poem is one of the most beautiful pieces of writing I have ever read. I know that probably sounded corny and crazy, but something about this poem made me cry. I hope that your dream really did come true, because it sounds like you really love her. Keep up the amazing works,
Lia Jnell

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
a beautiful and sweet poem. perfect for a wedding gift. u totily got my commplit attention. u can get the simpul and sweet things of love. wouderful job:)

Very very beautiful. i really like ur style. it flows so well. it's always good to see a male poet with so much skill. such a gift... at least ur using it : )
congrats.

Aww.. this is such a beautiful poem, it has some amazing imagery. The flow and rhythm is really good and it's very sweet. Great job on this! 5/5

Your choice of words is great and really sets the mood. This is a lovely poem and shows how great it is when dreams do come true.

Aww. Cute love story. :) Great job. You have always been a great writer. That is why you have always been on my favorites list. :)

>black&&blue

Awwww! Your An Amazing Love Poet! I Admire Your Work Now! You've Got Me Hooked And I Want To Read More! Brilliant..Just Brilliant I Enjoy Your Work So Much 5/5
Love,
Steph

A gorgeous poem. Simply there is nothing more to say... I loved it, like always. Great job, Darien. You're an amazing writer.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I love your rhymes....the wording you use...and the whole theme of your poems...simply amazing!!

This is really sweet!
It isnt often you hear a guy dreaming about weddings.
..xx

...A..m..a...z..i..n...g!!! Like wow, the words flow so easily, the meaning is amazing, and it has such a twisted eneding... you dont kno how its gonna end. Its heart breaking... but then happy. Absulotly amazing poem

Awestruck. wonderful & beautiful! :D

Very beautiful

Oh wow, another perfect poem from you. You are really one of the best poet in the site :| 5/5!

That was well sad. Really romantic and sweet.

Fantastic!!

This was sooo cute
i like it :)