by Bloomed Rose Jun 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
All some guys care about |
by Krissey
Man do you know how many girls want to find a guy like this..now a days doesn't seem like theres enough to go around..I like your style of writing this..I really enjoyed! :-) |
Hey! Good job. Proofread, you have a couple mistakes. kk? read mine, sis. Later |
by Mustafa
I Think that it was truly coming from |
by Jessica
Aww.. that was cute.. i think if you added in a little more emotion and some better descriptions it could be even better though! it was a great idea, but you made it feel a little bland.. sorry for being so blunt.. just a bit tired..so maybe just add a few more descriptive words and some more emotion and it will be great! |
Great poem, what a man hey, loved the formation,style and choice of words well done |