How sweet! I wish I had a boy like that! You may want to go back and edit some spots

Great poem, what a man hey, loved the formation,style and choice of words well done

Aww.. that was cute.. i think if you added in a little more emotion and some better descriptions it could be even better though! it was a great idea, but you made it feel a little bland.. sorry for being so blunt.. just a bit tired..so maybe just add a few more descriptive words and some more emotion and it will be great!

and hang out with out a care
^ "without" is one word.. and i dont think you should use "hang out" there as it sounds like you are repeating the word "out"

He'd hold my hand
All the time
Around his best friend
And he would call me
all the time
Our talking would never end
^ here, i also think that you should not use "all the time" twice, it ruins the effect..

And If I every had
^ it should be "ever" not "every"

good poem though.. ill give it a 4/5.. nice job!

I Think that it was truly coming from
somewehre inside you
and you should put more feelings in it

Hey! Good job. Proofread, you have a couple mistakes. kk? read mine, sis. Later

Man do you know how many girls want to find a guy like this..now a days doesn't seem like theres enough to go around..I like your style of writing this..I really enjoyed! :-)
-Krissey

P.S Could you read "Come kids dont play?