I hate to see you in so much p a i n

by SSSAAMMMYY   Jun 21, 2006


I hate to see you like this
Stop feeling like you don't exist
Wipe those tears from your eyes
Get rid of your happy disguise
Talk to me
Tell me what you feel
This pain is something you shouldn't conceal
Why are you hiding from me?
Where is that girl you use to be?
It's like I don't know you anymore
You're so different than you were before
It's not normal to feel so low
Please come back, and let this person go...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is a nice poem!
    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow amazing.... very interesting yah! job well done keep on writing!5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. that was great! the descriptions and emotion worked really well.. the only problem i have was with the flow, it didn't quite work.. keep it up though! 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A very talently written poem, great job
    it touched me

  • 18 years ago

    by blueyed baby

    This is far the best i think i have ever heard. and keep up the good work i looked forward to seeing more good things come from you.xxooxx

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