by dollwithafrown Jun 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I wrote this poem a little while ago after watching the One Tree Hill episode - "With Tired Eyes, Tired Minds, Tired Souls, We Slept" which is based on a school shooting. |
by Midnight Sun
Wow! I'm pretty much speechless...this was truly amazing!!! You described the fear and the pain the the true "need" for revenge so vividly. I almost feel like I am that person that's been tortured for so long..amazing write. 10/5 lmao! :) |
by Sora
I loved this poem, so detailed it's amazing, yer a wonderful poet keep it up! =] |
by Sydney
Wow, this poem is amazing! It has to much meaning and paints a vivid picture in my head. Very well written! You're really talented; never give up writing! :) |
This is a deep poem! I really like it... |
This is such a sad poem i am scared for this to happen at my school everyday...i love the way you put your words...your talented...keep it up! |