by ASPHYXIATED
Wow. |
Wow, so much emotion throughout awesome write. I loved it. I liked the questions at the end as well. The flow was really good too. |
by Carmen
This is very heartfelt and full of emotion. i loved it, but i've found two mistakes: |
by LadyPearl
Wow, excellent job. It had great transitions and emotions that kept me reading on and on. Very sad topic. Keep up the good work |
by Jenni Marie
Wow... |
by Edward D Zurovec
This is a sad poem,so very well written,I teared. Darkness does have a name Evil,Sin and Pride. |
by ellewen
Again excellent!!! I am amazed every time. So you are a one tree hill fan?? I used to watch that!! But then there were some other shows opposite of it and i stopped watching. So does this mean you watch the cw, or wb channel with gilmore girls, veronica mars, and all that good stuff lol??? I love meeting gilmore girl fans, and I was just wondering. I have been watching every tuesday with my mom since i was like 7 which is half my life,litterally. ~ Oh sorry I know im supposed to be commenting your poem! Dont get the wrong Idea, I LOVE your poem too, but I also love thta you were inspired by one of my favorite shows. You know that is a great idea- to get ideas from shows. I usually take my own expieriences, but I have never really thought about using the dramatic lives of fictional characters. Thats great and now you have inspired me! lol Kepp up your awesome work! |
by Goran Rahim
Great poem |
by kelS;
Omg. |
by Kayla
Hey i love this poem its so sad but its also true which makes me more sad that people can be so mean to others and not care about the consequences. the flow is very good and i wouldnt have changed a thing 5/5 |
by tiffany
Good job. this has a nice point to it and it makes me think a little bit. |
by Goran Rahim
Wow, another great one, great job....5/5 |
by Oscar
Incredible, you really captured my interest (except with the one tree hill part at the beginning, not a fan) but going on this poem was very good, it flowed well and i liked the rhyming, it didn't seem forced at all. |
by Dark Kitten
Beautifully written, the words just seem to flow from the page! I kind of like how you write things from books and series, and make them into a poem. I have no criticism for this either. =D |
Wow..that was complete amazing...definitely not what i expected when i clicked onto this poem... |
I think this was great. You really did a great job. This poem was filled with emotion and sadness. Well written. Keep up the good work. 5/5 |
This poem is so emotional and wonderful! I love how you base poems off of pop culture. Great job! |
Wow this is by far me favorite one out of the titles that you gave me. Its hard to know what someone is going through and how much more they can take. I do not belive that bulling should be allowed at all yet it takes place so many times.. However I aslo dont belive that the answer to this is shooting people but talking it over. But when no one notices you and no one cares its hard to see any other options. |
by AlaSkA
I like this write. i had a freind end his life at school. |
Amazing poem, almost perfectly written. It's true what you're saying about the darkness in people... |