Very sad :-( i almost cryed.. reminds me of my dad

This is always a very sensitive subject for people. Very real and emotional. I think the best part about your poem was that it was like a story, and the reader could really see what was happening. Good write. worth reading.

This is such a sad poem i am scared for this to happen at my school everyday...i love the way you put your words...your talented...keep it up!

This is a deep poem! I really like it...

Wow, this poem is amazing! It has to much meaning and paints a vivid picture in my head. Very well written! You're really talented; never give up writing! :)

I loved this poem, so detailed it's amazing, yer a wonderful poet keep it up! =]

Wow! I'm pretty much speechless...this was truly amazing!!! You described the fear and the pain the the true "need" for revenge so vividly. I almost feel like I am that person that's been tortured for so long..amazing write. 10/5 lmao! :)
~Jules