I didn't like the first part of the poem. It was too obviously philosophical. If I were you, I'd just describe how the clock was stuck, and then start talking about how we never really go anywhere, and how things never change. I'd still start and end with tick tock, but when things are obvious, it is practically an insult to the reader, as if the narrator were saying that the reader isn't smart enough to figure it out on their own.

I thought that was good.. the flow didn't work that well but it was okay.. the idea was very well though out.. and most of your descriptions were good.. maybe just work on the flow of the poem a bit.. (im not very good at that either.. lol) nice job! 5/5

The wording and content was great, however i do agree that the flow could have been better, overall good poem well done