Aw.. keep your chin up hun.. this was pretty good.. your emotions are clear, the flow was okay, as were your descriptions.. maybe add in some more detailed words or phrases to make it more exciting and poetic..

we were ment to be together,
^ should be "meant" not "ment"

you said you liked me but I knew theres was more to it,
^ should be "there's" not "theres"

nice job.. ill give you a 4/5!

Aside the few speeling errors this was a good poem, could have extended more on your feelings a little to create more empathy to the reader good effort lynne

Great poem-tons of emotion-well written 5/5 keep writing!

Good poem, I like how the last line wasn't part of a rhyme, that gave it a strong ending feel. I thought the rhythm was a bit wishy-washy in a few places, though in others it was really strong.

I think the flow could have been a bit better to this...ONly because its a pet peeve of mine to read a line with like four words then a line with 8..sorry I'm weird like that lol...anyways...over all way to express your feelings it was a good poem!!
-Krissey

P.S Could you read Some Kids dont play please?

This was good but again, the flow was off, it was just some lines were longer than others, didn't flow as nicely... also it was kind of generic, but it shows what you were feeling which is a good start, good job