Just a few tips before i tell you what i think.. most of the authors on here do not like it when you use slang and chat language, such as what you would use on messenger.. and typing in all caps is considered to be yelling.. lol.. just so you know.. this poem was excellent.. i truly enjoyed reading it.. i can relate and i am sure so can many others.. this flowed well and all the rhymes worked.. the descriptions and words used were nice as well.. great job! 5/5

Hey good poems keep it up and thanks 4 comment my poem hey can u read some of my poems and tell me wat u think please!! and u keep the good work

j3ssica