Wow this is really great

kazza

WOW! what an amaaazinng write! this was powerful and so so dark.. it made me shiver.. your words and descriptions were really excellent.. the imagery was awesome as were your choice of words! 5/5

Great use of words and imagery, you can organize it more so it has a better flow

He yi love this poem
i rocks
def 5/5, luv mel

Wow, very dark. This is definetly my kind of poem. I like the thought I of all the mirrors surounding her. It brings a haunting presents. Great work.

Gave me CHILLS. Omg you are def. one for imagery. I loved it. Spooky. Cool twist at the end, keep it up!

5/5

joy*:.xx

Woww, amazing write, intense imagery, dark notions, everything in this poem is so abundant and gripping. Perfect. Beautiful write! 5/5

Your words are powerfull, and you can imaging images so deep through this poem, but the flow was a little off, other than that a wonderfull poem

Honey, how can you possible manage to like.. WRiTE this stuff? It`s so great. I haven`t read one of your poems yet that`s not simply incredible.

I really like the story in this -- it`s interesting and makes you want to read it over and over again!
Loved it for sure!! 5/5

**Samantha Hollywood

Neatpoem, keep it up!

Beautifully heartbreaking. i adored it completely and wholly. you have a serious gift for making the sad poems make the reader cry. lol, or maybe that's just ,me...

Beautiful! It was so dark and powerful! I loved every bit of it! The imagery was amazing. You are an amazing writer. I really have nothing to say.. Keep writing!!!

Cayce

Awwww good poem 5/5