My Pain

by Jordanna   Jun 21, 2006


My pain is like a bottle exploding and bubbling.....

My pain is like a drop of rain pouring out every where.....

My pain is like a cat clawing trying to get out.....

My pain is like a mousetrap snapping when something is caught.....

My pain is like a volcano erupting with lots of force.....

My pain is like a crowded room struggling for air.....

My pain isn't like a wound that will heal its like a scar that wont disappear.....

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  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    I love it.. i can relate. i love htis poem tho. its so good. it has good flow and rhythm.. its amazing.. ur very talented.. keep it up.. i like it alot
    great job
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Good poem- loved the last line:

    "My pain isn't like a wound that will heal its like a scar that wont disappear....."

    amazing---