by Natalie Jun 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The image I portray is only an illusion, |
Very nice. I have parts of me locked away, hidden from pain. this poem describes that place. Great job. |
by Mousie
Really a good poem... I liked the second one i read better (sry cannot for the life of me remember the name) but this was good... nice job |
Wow, its a really nice one natalie. keep up the good work. the element of sadness has been portrayed brilliantly. keep in touch. i would need your honest critique too. |
by Constance
This is a great poem and I understand the emotion behind it .. the emotion that i am getting anyway. |
I like the words you used in your poem...that was what i was looking for in the pass few days....finally found sth i want to see... |