Great poem it is so true and it is really different. iT IS great I really like it

Great poem very sad. O can relate to how youmusthave felt at the time you wrote this. The flow is uniteruppted except the first stanza last 2 lines don't really rhyme. The imagery of this lost soul of this girl who is trapped in her miserable life comes to mind.
I like in the 3rs stnaza how youy used the word vacate to rhyme with hate...it is original and not like some poems where 'simple' words are used for all the rhyme...I am sure you know those types...lol
Very well done!

Jeez. Not another one! How do you people do it?! One great poem after another? It was absolutely amazing and im speachless. i honestly don't know what to tell you that all these other people haven't already said. you must already no it was great!

Amberinaa*

Interesting work.
its so differnt from anything iove ever read.
thats such an incredible gift to behold.

thanks for entering the comp and ill get back to u asap
~Emma

I like the words you used in your poem...that was what i was looking for in the pass few days....finally found sth i want to see...
i can relate to this poem...thats what i do everyday...walls would never dissapear until i met someone who understands me...
Nice Work..Its beautiful!!

This is a great poem and I understand the emotion behind it .. the emotion that i am getting anyway.

Wow, its a really nice one natalie. keep up the good work. the element of sadness has been portrayed brilliantly. keep in touch. i would need your honest critique too.

Really a good poem... I liked the second one i read better (sry cannot for the life of me remember the name) but this was good... nice job

Very nice. I have parts of me locked away, hidden from pain. this poem describes that place. Great job.