by Nelle Jun 21, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
If i give you all the answers |
by Tara Kay
The flow wasnt perect, and the rhyming was off but the message and meaning was great, keep writing, you'll get better as time passes |
by Jessica
This was also good.. but most of the rhymes didn't really work.. again, i liked your idea. maybe try and work on the flow and your rhymes a little.. nice job! 4/5 |
Straight from the heart |