Would you

by Nelle   Jun 21, 2006


If i give you all the answers
Would you really believe me
If i told you what was going on
Would you still need me

If i filled you in on what's real
Would you really truly feel
If i helped you up, even higher
Would you try your best to not sigh

If i made you see, this is reality
Would you open up and really see
If i told you every secret
Would you make it a point to come to me

If i left tomorrow and never returned
Would you remember, and always adore
If i came back and started over
Would you let me in, or push me away

If i told you everything now
Would you get happy, or utterly depressed
If i made you see this is real
Would you take it in, or would you flee

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    The flow wasnt perect, and the rhyming was off but the message and meaning was great, keep writing, you'll get better as time passes
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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was also good.. but most of the rhymes didn't really work.. again, i liked your idea. maybe try and work on the flow and your rhymes a little.. nice job! 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Straight from the heart

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