Comments : An Instant of Delusion

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    NEAT!! wicked poem girl!!
    i loved this.. ur poems always turn out to be awesome.. keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Awww hun its a brill poem n itz fr me :D dats soOoOoo top!!! i lve u to bitz n pieces hun o n keep rytn yr bril at it! xmwahx

  • 17 years ago

    by CarissalRADIOFACEl

    The stanzas with 6 and 5 lines, threw me off just a little, but it doesn't make this poem any less sweet. Great write~

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    You're really good at friendship poems and it seems like you value your best mate so much..poem whispered me that...anyway
    Good job
    Take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I htink thats 15 now hun. Your poems are so cool keep making people read thm you neverk now where they may lead... keep in touch ok

    xxx alex xxx