Omg wow i lvoe it.. it has alot of emotion in it. its realy deep. but i can relate to it.. this is a great poem. it is jus amazing. it has great flow word choice and rhythm.. amazing job
take care and stay strong
angie

Woah this poem is just like me.. i can comeptly relateto this, i really hope everything is ok,
awesome poem tho xox

Your poems can bring tears to my eyes too... i wish i knew what to say for this one.. exept that you are a great poet, and a friend i should have gotten to know better a long time ago

So deep.powerful and emotional, great poem well done

Hmm, i like this one, the meaning of it all and the question you never quite can answer.
JBN

My life seems cursed,
forever in darkness,
everyone seems happy,
but what about me?
[I liked that stanza! Speshly the question.]
With your i's, Try and captialise them.. Some people downvote poems for things like that. So just try do use the best grammer you can. =)

Usually I don't really like poems that always repeat certain words. Like you repeated 'alone' quite abit. But I actually liked it. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Some part of me wishes I could reach out and help, sorry if that sounds a little...odd, to say the least. I realate so much to your poems, and I love the way they read, and the style of them. They are all very good! 5/5(again!)

Ravyn

I WILL WALK WITH U

Wicked Poem. You got the exact meaning I was aiming for with one of mine, but unfortunatly I'm not that good with words ;) Keep it up, you poems or Wack!