I loved that! its so good..

Wow thats really go, good use of vocabulary and rhyming. beautiful poem

Really good keep it up 5/5

Hi. i been seeing you on like every forum ive written in and i wanted 2 say ur an amazing poet! i love this poem because, like all of them, have excellent wording and descriptions! the rhyming was smooth too. gr8 work

Magnificent.. It Gave Me Chills...

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xLaurenx

That was very well written....I could almost see what you wrote as if it were a movie in my head....well done...

Wow, this is very good. I love the flow and rhyming within this peice of work. Excellent use of words. Good Job. Keep it up! :) 5/5

Wow, this is very good. I love the flow and rhyming within this peice of work. Excellent use of words. Good Job. Keep it up! :) 5/5

Youve used such amazing images in this poem! especially with the descriptions including water. its a poem filled with emotion but described in such a distant way that it becomes sorrowfull. really well written.
xxx
(thanks for your kind comments on my poem)

Awesome poem! I really liked these lines:
"Here I lay fading; a broken oath patiently waiting
A king has fallen beneath the waterfall cascading"
--- wonderful rhymes and flow throught the whole poem.
Good work!
5/5

Crimson River, an amazing title, it made me want to read the poem right away.
And such haunting words..
As i read this poem, i got chills down my spine.
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

That was a really great poem. It gave me an odd sort of feeling, not the chills, but something else. When I read it it reminded me of a few things yet it reminded me of nothing at all. The way the words were used and the way everything flowed and fit. wow.