Comments : Haunted (my frist poem)

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Awwwww Megan I love it!!! haha i also LOVEEEEEEE Your profile!! It makes me feel all fuzzy inside. And I'm really happy that you decided to be here on P&Q with me!!! I love you Megan!!! XD

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I liked your poem because you described how someone can be haunting you and you don't want it to be that way.
    If you want to improve your poem, I think you should tell more about you're feelings, how do you feel about being haunted...confused, sad, mad...

    Good job!

    Keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by 4everNaday

    U read this 2 on the fone.
    its great