Show me the light

by we_all_live_to_die   Jun 21, 2006


Here I stand,
I feel all alone,
even though i'm surrounded,
by so many that care

I'm waiting for someone,
I don't know her name,
to hold in my arms,
and show me the light

i'm lost in this darkness,
the dark of my thoughts,
I feel as if i'm falling,
farther into the dark

will anyone catch me,
stop me from falling,
to look me in the eyes,
and show me the light

this knife through my wrist,
as I remember the past,
only to be let go,
as I was stabbed in the back,

I feel that life isn't worth living,
I can't find the light,
will anyone catch me,
and show me the light

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This was a sad poem...beautiful but very sad.
    I hope that you have found her by now!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 18 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    I love it. Very nicely done =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Such a sad poem. I can really relate to the feeling of being alone and feeling as though nobody can seem to drag me out of the darkness.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Will anyone catch me,
    stop me from falling,
    [I really liked those lines!]

    This was a sad poem, and sadly I can relate. I didn't really see anything in this one that needs changing, thought it was great the way it is! =) 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

    P.S. Sorry I've taken so long to return the favor.. my mouse died =(

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Well since were all huggin eachother in the forum i thot id give u a comment hug. :D wow this is amazing. nice use of wording. plus it really painted a picture. gr8 work.

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