The Pain Inside

by Sovanny   Jun 21, 2006


I hurt myself
By slitting my wrists
Now i sit here looking at that shelf Wondering why i did this
I hit the floor
Whats happening
Why cant i reach the door
Now i c people i once loved in life
Are they crying cause i'm dying
Why did i use that knife
I have ended what i began
So i leave my last wish
To remember me as i was....

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  • 18 years ago

    by CiNDY iS BAkk

    This is an awsome poem.
    I like how it has lots of emotion and the flow.
    Also how you wrote it and i like the choice of the words as well.
    Love it, 5/5!
    ~*~Cindy~*~

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  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Amazing poem .i love it. it has alot of emotion in it.. i like how u wrote it.. it has good flow and word choice and rhythm.. great job.. keep it up... 5/5
    take care
    angie

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