Amazing poem .i love it. it has alot of emotion in it.. i like how u wrote it.. it has good flow and word choice and rhythm.. great job.. keep it up... 5/5
take care
angie
This is an awsome poem.
I like how it has lots of emotion and the flow.
Also how you wrote it and i like the choice of the words as well.
Love it, 5/5!
~*~Cindy~*~