Wow great poem got me thinking, the last stanza was brill. well done, can't wait to read more, much luv lynne

I like it.......its capturing and inchanting comparring ones self to the loss of something in natures beauty is brilliant! nice work
XOXOXOX
Kamille
P.S. come check out some of my poems! i reccomand reading Safety Pin its my favorite.

I really like this.
It had me thinking at the beginning
I like the way it flows too.
It's all true when you think about it.
Nice job :)