Only one understands

by we_all_live_to_die   Jun 21, 2006


I feel so ashamed,
when you see me like this,
tears running down,
blood on my wrist,

I feel so afraid,
I feel so worthless,
I feel so alone,
I feel so useless,

I have so many that care,
only one understands,
there are only a few,
those of us with,
our own blood on our hands..

she tells me its ok,
and to look towards the future,
but im afraid,

so afraid,
to lose everything again,
that long ago I lost

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very expressive, can really feel the fear and confusion in this piece. You expressed yourself well and conveyed this brilliantly to the reader. I am sure that a lot of people will be able to relate to this piece.
    Well written and expressed

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Well, i really liked it!! It was good...I kind of can relate in a way!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by eveofcoleman

    Man ithink this one may be my fav that or the one u put on ympsace last...anyways i jsut think...that liek u said u should look toward the future...although it may be hard...i know...and im here for ya amn if ya need anyone

  • 18 years ago

    by cuppycake

    I loved this poem, because it can relate to alot of people. Being afraid of the future and what is still to come, and the unknown. I liked the begining and how it flowed. Good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Those of us with,
    our own blood on our hands.
    ------------------------------------------

    That was my favorite line. You can only imagine why. Another beauty, and I can't wait to read the next one. 5/5

    Ravyn Faelynn

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