That was so good. some parts of it sound like my life.

This is just like what we talked about...
some day we'll find ourselves truly happy, no i dont believe that all the time i question it way too much. but if there wasnt some kind of hope would we really be here? i know i wouldnt, cause i lost it before and it almost cost me my life... but looking back.. there are days when im glad im still here. theres always gonna be brighter days, and for us they'll be the brightest of all cause we waited so long and hard and felt so much hurt. thanks for sharing... your amazing i'll be yet another person to remind you =) we all need that sometimes

This is a really sad poem, but amazingly and beautifully written. Great piece 5/5 xx

The poem was alright, but maybe explain a bit more in detail so the readers can feel and sense everything. Also maybe uppercase the i's.
i feel so afraid,
i feel so worthless,
i feel so alone,
i feel so useless,
Well maybe let us know why you do. Or you can leave it because this part made sense in a way.

Tears runing down
[Think you mean "running"]
There's nothing else really..wrong with this poem, I thought it was pretty good.. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Those of us with,
our own blood on our hands.
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That was my favorite line. You can only imagine why. Another beauty, and I can't wait to read the next one. 5/5

Ravyn Faelynn

I loved this poem, because it can relate to alot of people. Being afraid of the future and what is still to come, and the unknown. I liked the begining and how it flowed. Good job 5/5

Man ithink this one may be my fav that or the one u put on ympsace last...anyways i jsut think...that liek u said u should look toward the future...although it may be hard...i know...and im here for ya amn if ya need anyone

Well, i really liked it!! It was good...I kind of can relate in a way!! 5/5

Very expressive, can really feel the fear and confusion in this piece. You expressed yourself well and conveyed this brilliantly to the reader. I am sure that a lot of people will be able to relate to this piece.
Well written and expressed