The imagery is this poem was amazing...i had never made the connection to a path or roadway and life but you have done that a fantastically in this write!!
Almost gives meaning to the saying..." i have beendown that road before..."

Absolutely fantastic, sweetie. You leave a great imagery with your words.
One thing I might change, although it's not so big.. just the joys of being so terribly 'English'..
"My iron horse held back only by me"

I'd probably prefer to read as "by only me"

hope you don't mind.. all in all, 5/5, as always. Well done. xx

Wonderfully done my friend. Words are perfectly devised, imagery is fantastic. Truthful words.

Bill your poem conveys a very loving relationship with your future wife. Good luck to you and to her.
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

Very good, I loved it, 5/5 keep up the good work!

What a beautiful poem bill. You always put your feeling into poetry in a way we can understand your experiences. And your furture wife is a very lucky woman. Most women can say their man didn't wite poetry for them. Loretta

What a beautiful poem bill. You always put your feeling into poetry in a way we can understand your experiences. And your furture wife is a very lucky woman. Most women can say their man didn't wite poetry for them. Loretta

What a beautiful poem bill. You always put your feeling into poetry in a way we can understand your experiences. And your furture wife is a very lucky woman. Most women can say their man didn't wite poetry for them. Loretta

Very nice and beautiful