by Oceansoul Jun 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Oceans around me |
by Lovely Bones
Wow that is a powerful metaphorical piece.. with the oceans and everything portraying how alone you are and the desperation of trying to find someone in a vast last (well thats my interpretation) it was very beautiful. I love haikus, you did a good job. Keep it up! |