Homesick Lover

by Heather   Jun 21, 2006


I sit and look out my window.
Waiting and watching.
Hoping and dreaming.
And thinking of you.
It's been months since I've seen your face.
And had a warm place in my heart.
I wonder what you're doing.
When you'll be home.
When I'll see you again.
What I'll say to you, what you'll say to me.
If I'll still love you, or if you'll love me back at last.
I feel homesick... and it's all for you.
You make me a homesick lover.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rene

    Really good poem, the flow is off a little bit, but overall it's nice, simple, and a very creative poem. GOOD one.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A very nice one, I really love it
    great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Its straight forward, its meaningful but easily understood, the flow seemed rocky in places but it was a good job. keep writing
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris

    That is very straight foward....no metaphors or anything lol still it is great !! I love it very good writing 5/5

    CHris

  • 18 years ago

    by *Sweet as your worst nightmare*

    Wow, its amazing. the flow is excellent! 5/5

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