The flow was a little off I think...overall very nice and short poem

Yeah as Dre4meR and Brianna said It was a very good poem, but the flow was a little off. I loved the ending though. Good job!

I love the last line of this poem! It really sums it up well--- And the poem really shows how love can captivate some ones mind! Great write----5/5

This one was really good.....great job.....5/5

Wow, its amazing. the flow is excellent! 5/5

That is very straight foward....no metaphors or anything lol still it is great !! I love it very good writing 5/5

CHris

Its straight forward, its meaningful but easily understood, the flow seemed rocky in places but it was a good job. keep writing
xx

A very nice one, I really love it
great job

Really good poem, the flow is off a little bit, but overall it's nice, simple, and a very creative poem. GOOD one.