Comments : One Day I May Be Able To

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Whoa. thats all i can say. that was really good and clear. very deep and thought out. i liked it alot.
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    One day I may be able to,
    Let you in on my past,
    But I doubt you will ever let,
    Our relationship last.

    absolutely amazing stanza right there. this poem read as, pure emotion, my favorite kind of poem :). I know that stuff like this can be hard, just keep pressing on...I voted 5/5 on this