Comments : Another Way To Die

  • 18 years ago

    by uponfairywings

    "Love is another way to die"......I love it.....makes sense.....great poem...wonderful line!

    xoxoxo Haley

  • 18 years ago

    by Same Year Reply

    Wow, that is so good. i'm adding you to my favorites!

  • 17 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was really sad.
    the imagery was great and the flow was good too.

    Everyone thoughts are to be mean
    At least thats what I've seen
    My heart will never be fixed
    Tears and blood have mixed

    My time is being cut slow
    Beyond that door, I no longer go
    I must say my goodbyes
    Hell kept quite in these eyes

    this stanza's were perfect.i really liked this.
    5/5
    keep up the good work.
    take care.
    best wishes

  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Woow this was great. i loved reading it 5/5
    *kasia*

  • 12 years ago

    by Lauren denbow

    This is really good.

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Great poem!