Omg... i really like this!!! its good!! it has so much emotion in it!! and i as a reader can understand the way you are feeling... if you are feeling like that.. but yeh.. good job ... keep up the good work!! i give you 5/5!!
xoxoxoxoxo
kayla

It's an awesome poem, except I have to say please don't do anything bad to yourself. xox

HateOnMe.xx

Your really good 5/5 nice choice of words please comment back =)

Good poem- keep up the good work
tika
xx

I liked it, i didnt love it because the subject is one i do not enjoy. But the poem was good, and it was okay
xxxxx

...fabulous...ohh hun this is amazing 5/5 wow u show soo much emotion i loves it...

xox

Ill leave another one coz im bored, its a really good poem though :-) 5/5 definitely...

my last poem was kinda blunt tho so i leave another one :-)

xx

Wow...very impressive...it rymed so well..and just, flowed together amazingly...5/5
Fallengod

Aww this is really sad huni, i love it, sorry u feel this way, if u need something im here,

luv always

Awi love this poem
its perfect.
and if u ever need to talk im here
i went through this too
and its haunting me its coming back =[

Wow beautifully written!!! =]]

Deep, eerie, amazing... i love this poem because it talks about something real... keep uhp the good work !

Beautiful as always, scary because it is to close to what I've thought and almost done, but the feelings are very nicely captured. Keep up writing PLEASE!
XOXOXHUGSXOXOX- Rhiannon Morgana

The way you wrote this is amazing! It all seems so real. I could picture it all in my head and I could really feel the emotion you put into it. Absolutely beautiful. Definite 5 out of 5.