The one i love

by Paige aka Kayla   Jun 21, 2006


I met you not so long ago
But you've already touched my heart
With your smile, your touch and your loving presence
It's like I've been struck with cupids dart

I fell in love with your amazing charm
And your loving touch
It's like I already know we are meant to be
It's just I like you so, so much

Everytime I see you
It make's my heart skip a beat
And everytime I see you
It make's me feel complete

I don't know why I have these feelings
Since I dont know you very well
But when I'm with you i feel whole, and like there's something there
But I guess only time will tell

I hope you feel these things I feel
Because I think together we'd be great
But if you don't
Ill know It's because I left telling you my feelings too late!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by XxMakeDamnSurexX

    Wow this reminds me of a poem that i wrote. I know exactly what this one is saying.
    kayla

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A good poem, but i think it could be an even better poem with a little more structure. i'm sorry if it seems that i keep attacking your work, and that i keep giving you tips like i'm the best poet ever. Its just, i like to tell the truth otherwise what's the point it commenting at all, and i just want to give my advice. anyway, my favorite stanza was the third one, its was perfectly written and structured.

    Brad

    P.S. yes you can use my poem 'words won't do', as can you with all my poems. you can also past them off as your own if you want, i just want people to read my work.

    P.P.S. thank you for your comment on 'Words won't do', especially the part about taking my writing further.

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