"your the only thing I want,"
you're, not your
~~~
I liked the repititious theme, since this was a pretty short poem. It was nice and fun (christmas is still far away though, I'm sure you'll have time to find a guy on your own before then).

Awww This Is Beautiful! And Its So Cute :D 5/5
♥
Steph

Now I got that song in my head "All I want for Christmas is youuuuu BAYBAY!" haha...loved this poem and hope this 2006 Christmas you get what you want!
-Krissey!

P.S could you read "Some kids don't play"

Awww.. very sweet poem! i loved it.. its cute how you didn't just say you wanted him, but you wanted him for x-mas.. great job! found it highly enjoyable! 5/5

Very cute. That's all I have to say.